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Today’s Assignment (11-April-20)
Write a TAT story on the following image:
Submit your answers by commenting below.
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Aron , Anna and Suzan were research scholars in Harvard University . During their final term they decided to go out for a dinner outing . They went to a famous restaurant nearby . After ordering food they started talking regarding their final research submissions and discussed strategies. After the food arrived they raised a toast and started eating . Suddenly after some time Suzan seemed very uncomfortable and struggling Aron noticed something is not right and asked her but Suzan was unable to answer . Aron figured out that she’s choking he stood up and started giving her pats on her back in order to push the struck food out . Seemingly Anna called for helf Aron performed various methods by lifting her up and strong pats , After a few moments the struck food came out and she was able to breathe normally . Yet they enjoyed the food and split the bill among them and went back .
The story is good but too many details are involved. You can reduce those. This will help you save time. Similarly, in the conclusion there was no need to talk about the bill. Talking about the bill is something that leaves a bad taste of the story. Otherwise a good attempt. Keep writing!
Will keep ot compact and crisp
Ram, is working in a leading IT company. One day as a part of his annual meetings he was going to banquet hall for a meeting and dinner with the leaders along with his colleagues. They going they saw a old man who was sleeping on roadside in a filthy condition. This disturbed this with his colleagues Mary and Zoya. They also felt the same and Ram decided to do something so he came up with the idea to coordinate with the company CSR team and make these old people to accommodate at the old age homes. He approached the CSR team and organized a program in collaboration with NGO in which most of the employees attended with kids who learn empathy and kindness on the 2nd Saturday of every month.
There is a simple inconsistency in the story that he was going to the banquet hall for a meeting, whereas the picture clearly shows that he had already arrived there. This mistake has left the story structurally inefficient. Ensure that part is taken care of. Good luck!
Sumit, Vivek and Deeksha were three best friend nd were pursuing their post graduation in microbiology. In there college there were not so much advance lab and equipment. So all the students face big issue to complete their research. Once they went outside for a dinner nd meet there an person wo was a scientist. after a little conversation the scientists told them about a group scholarship test. They decided to participate in that test nd win the prize money as they will bring some research facilities in their college by that prize money. They started their preparation nd divided all the tasks as everyone has its importance nd prepared it well.
In last the got 2nd prize nd received medals from education minister of state. They told the minister the condition of their college nd lack of equipment their. So minister planed a trip went their and after analysing everything arranged a fund for the welfare of that college.
after all that everyone thanked minister as well as all the three students.
Grammatical errors are rampant and need to be checked. Also, make sure that the story remains consistent and crisp. This will improve the quality of the answer significantly. Additionally, make sure that the story shall not go too long because the space to write the story is very less. Keep writing!
Sumit was a final year mechanical engineering student who was preparing for ssb after clearing cds to join Indian navy.He organise his daily routine according to a defence aspirant. He included running, exercise, reading newspaper,novels, watching news and sports on daily basis he also started taking balance diet which include proteins and carbs, and adequate amount of sleep, he also manage academic studies as well.After soo much of hard work and dedication he got recommended before passing out the college. After his gradution he moved to Indian Naval Academy for training where he learnt all the skills required to be a good officer, he took part in various competition and performed well in all terms.When he reached final term he called his best friends sarthak and neha to accompany him during Naval Ball where he introduced his friends to his course mates and talk about their child hood memories and took dinner and enjoyed.After few months sumit passed out from the academy and commissioned in Navy.
The story is good, but it can be reduced in length. Additionally, try to write stories such that all the characters displayed in the image are involved somehow to the story in an active manner. In this story, they are merely visitors. Otherwise the story is good. Keep writing!
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Ajay was the working professional in IT as a senior manager.he leave along his wife rekha.one day he and his wife decided that to you surprised party to daughter rahini.as daughter came to home after completing MSC in good university.as soon as she they give the surprised party at hotel.while on dissuasion was going on she told to their parents that she wanted to work for society .give the best knowledge to people ,also wants to work upbringing the society regarding issue of narrow mindest aginst education of girls.while listening the his daughter wish . parents are so happy,give her daughter permission and enjoy the party well
Shubham this story can be improved on multiple grounds. First and foremost is the grammar. There are many issues with the grammar, but keep practising and these will improve. Then, the story was going fine till the end where the daughter does not have any freedom of her own and needs her parent’s permission to work as a social worker. Keep writing!
Rahul is last semester Btech student and got successfully placed in a MNC in the campus placement, even most of his friend got placed, knowing to the fact they soon will get engage in their professional life rahul planned for a Party and get all his friend know about the timing. He got a table booked in the hotel restaurants , thereafter they all enjoyed the evening and after getting busy in their professional life used to meet once a year at some tourist spot altogether.
The story doesn’t have a strong background. It merely represents an incident of how a person attended a party after scoring a good job. Try to write a story such that at-least some OLQs are put at display. And that is not necessarily required to be shown through some story of hardship. Your response can be improved on that ground. Keep writing!